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Kristina and Will look at common email mistakes (using real examples) and rewrite them so that you can learn what to do differently.
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In this episode, we will showcase a technical product email and get insights from Will why verbiage for tech products doesn’t have to be complicated.
Related: Complexity Bias, Occam’s Razor & Your Sales Process
Watch the re-write, and check out the before and after emails below!
Technical Products Don’t = Complex Emails
Alfonso – I presume you saw this document: Kubernetes Hardening Guide” from National Security Agency (NSA).
It recommends that Pod Security must be hardened using SELinux, AppArmor and Seccomp.
This is what we do. We have open sourced our Kubernetes runtime security platform. OurCompany has been embraced by CNCF.
Worth taking a look?
Cheers,
Take 1: Signature Line Lift
Subject: Kubernetes
Alfonso – Did you check out the NSAs latest piece on Kubernetes?
They’re big on Pod Security hardening right now.
Curious if your team has had success using SELinux, AppArmor or Seccomp.
^ Their suggestion
Cheers,
REP
{First} {LastName}
{Company Name}
Kubernetes runtime security platform
Embraced by CNCF
Take 2: Priority Check
Subject: Pod Hardening
Alfonso,
Curious if you saw the NSA’s new security recs on Kubernetes.
They sounded the alarm bell on hardening.
We built a runtime security platform that helps with this. Open to checking it out?
REP
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